Ah! Finally I get a chance to read this! sheesh!

I really like it! I don't know why you think you can't write Kara, she was very good here. I can see a younger Kara being like this, easily.

Also, I like the bookending scenes of the two of them, one under real sun and sky and the other under the closest thing they've got to it, and how everything has changed so much in between. Lovely!

this icon seems strangely inappropriate. *sigh*