ext_28323 ([identity profile] feelforfaith.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] picfor1000 2009-09-09 01:24 am (UTC)

Neither of them make a move to back away, and John relaxes a little, lets it push him a little closer to Ronon. "We should find a hotel," Ronon says, and John can't help laughing, Earth phrases in Ronon's mouth.

This was lovely. John seems so lost and I love how Ronon has a simple answer to John's unasked questions, from "I'm not sleeping with her," through "I'm not McKay," to "We should find a hotel." Great story :).

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